deviant art

Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]
Download File
TXT, 875 bytes
more ▶

More from =WiNGz69

Featured in Groups:

Details

February 3
875 bytes
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 36
Favourites: 41 [who?]

Views: 506 (0 today)
Downloads: 7 (0 today)
[x]
Caught on a tight-rope between moon beams
somewhere hidden within a dream

A landscape of stars scatter at the touch of the brush
only to come together in a spiral that dances in a dizzying rush

Teetering neither to the right nor to the left
playing a game of balance tip-toeing just on the center line

Watching the metronome swing as two stars collide and intertwine
creating an explosion in iridescent hues and a fusion of harmonic tunes

As I catch a drift off a comet's tail and free-fall through the center
to wake up in bed and realize its all just a dream...

................just a dream

........................just a dream

................................all but a little dream.
:iconwingz69:
Just a little dream.
Add a Comment:
 
love 4 4 joy 2 2 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconambiguous-catharsis:
=Ambiguous-Catharsis May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi! Just wanted to let you know that your amazing work has been featured here: [link]
Reply
:iconwingz69:
=WiNGz69 May 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you, I appreciate it :love:.
Reply
:iconambiguous-catharsis:
=Ambiguous-Catharsis May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
Reply
:iconauroramycano:
So beautiful! <3 :)
Reply
:iconwingz69:
=WiNGz69 Mar 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :)
Reply
:iconauroramycano:
Most welcomed! :)
Reply
:iconadagiobunny:
~Adagiobunny Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
that opening line - we're walking a fine-tipped path, balancing our dreams with our lucid moments.

& the stars as a landscape - walking upon space, grasping at lights...

beautiful words. :heart:
Reply
:iconwingz69:
Mood: Love =WiNGz69 Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
This is the most beautiful interpretation of this poem I've have received yet, its as if you've seen past the poem and into me. Thank you.
Reply
:iconadagiobunny:
~Adagiobunny Mar 22, 2013  Student Writer
ahh, i am so incredibly glad my words could have touched you so.
Reply
:iconelskerr:
Mood: Joy ~Elskerr Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very pretty!
Reply
Add a Comment: