deviant art

Deviant Login Shop
 Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

More from =WiNGz69


×
Intricate butterfly how you weave such
an interesting pattern in the dust

Of buildings long crumbled in soot and ash they lay
telling stories of glories that once stood proud

Flying in a world so black and white
with rain that tips and taps in a melancholic blues

Your flight is laboured and your wings covered in oily residue
Of too many burdens too often held

Sometimes I see you there behind metallic bars
the place where you hide all your scars

Intricate little butterfly

If only you could see all the colors you possess
you would light this world up and the sun with it

Let the rain wash away the pain
and just maybe next time you hear it

It wont play such a melancholic blues

116

18 28 3
Download TXT download, 897 bytes
For a special friend. Enjoy.

Details

Stats

Submitted on
February 5
File Size
897 bytes
Views
116
Favourites
18 (who?)
Comments
28
Downloads
3
URL
Thumb
Only verified accounts can report policy violations. Please check your email and click on the verification link.
* Required field
Add a Comment:
 
love 3 3 joy 2 2 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconsilviamarti:
*SilviaMarti Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's a very nice piece, congrats... :D
Reply
:iconwingz69:
=WiNGz69 Mar 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :)
Reply
:iconsilviamarti:
*SilviaMarti Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :aww:
Reply
:iconstory-of-a-mind:
~Story-of-a-Mind Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think I also know people who are like your butterfly. Blind to their own beautiful colours.
I love this poem.
Reply
:iconwingz69:
=WiNGz69 Feb 17, 2013  Student Writer
Everyone admires the butterflies beauty but the butterfly unable to see Herself is blissfully unaware. Sometimes this is true, and thank you for the kind words.
Reply
:iconebenewood:
Beautiful.....Rhythm of life can be so suffocating sometimes...Even "wings" can't help you.....:sun:
Reply
:iconwingz69:
=WiNGz69 Feb 7, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you for the wonderful comment my friend. And its too true, life can be quite suffocating at times but just like a storm it only lasts for so long before the Sun breaks through to shed some light.
Reply
:iconebenewood:
You're welcome!
Beware of light...sometimes it hurts too. :) We have to accept the fact that suffering is a part of life. Trust again is the hardest. :sun:
Reply
:iconwingz69:
=WiNGz69 Feb 9, 2013  Student Writer
This is also very true, thank you for reminding me of importance (to me). Its true that trust is the hardest but to not trust life is not truly living and yes, suffering is a part of life. Something worth remembering.
Reply
:iconlilmijou:
Mood: Love ~LilMijou Feb 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Uplifting and heartbreakingly inspirational
Reply
Add a Comment: